Jasmine Hart

Hi Gemma. Hope you like it here!Practise makes perfect, and of course you can write prose. I thought I couldn't, but you just have to make yourself, and again, keep ...

Egg yolk orange

geography

I would like to do this, but I'd need to see how many posts would be required per week and what length would be expected for each. Any idea on ...

Hi. Samara definetely rings a bell...you may have been in a storybook I was in at some stage...or else I've just seen your name somewhere...though I have a feeling it ...

I've been writing poetry for years, and feel my improovement to be slow and gradual. I thought this was the case with everyone, until I started reading your stuff. Seriously, ...

Lol. This is so funny! The rhythm in stanza three is kind of out...I'd make suggestions on how to imprrove it, but for some reason I wanted to read this ...

I think I've fallen in love with this joke. I just love it. I'd put "of my attire" on its own line, and the same for "take you home". Some ...

You could be a bunch of grapes. My brother keeps trying to get me to do that. You just stick a bunch of green or purple balloons to yourself.

I love the Halloween-ness! :D

Hi. I like this piece overall, and Kit has made some good points. I have a few little suggestions; (I'll try hard not to repeat what Kit has said!) I'd ...

Glad to hear it Cat. You'll develop a thick skin with time and get a sense of what to listen to and what to ignore. Generally, critics here aren't trying ...

metal

:( Em...ok, serious brainstorming...Kit made some good suggestions a little while back, is there anything there which you can work with? Let's see...em, you have the whole thing with Gregory ...

Keturah "What can I do for you, Keturah?" Oliver asked, smiling. His smile lacked warmth, but most smiles did. "You've done all you can for me already." I replied. "I ...